tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post3061818580546544702..comments2023-06-12T06:57:10.631-07:00Comments on Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu: Chapter OneUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-10629055777979177612012-05-20T07:03:44.308-07:002012-05-20T07:03:44.308-07:00Okay, two things.
One: Holy crap, he's a bit...Okay, two things. <br /><br />One: Holy crap, he's a bit of a wanker. But in the nicest, and hottest kind of way. The suit, the hair, the polite, yet completely rude way he speaks to her? Singularly they might be nothing to look at, but when you put them all together and mix them up? Hot! She should say yes. Hell, I would. <br /><br />Two: hahaha, someone called him a "smooth dick".MissWinkleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06384028185444397334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-26259467564429628692012-05-07T19:38:37.158-07:002012-05-07T19:38:37.158-07:00Asshole, but yet you leave me wanting more of him....Asshole, but yet you leave me wanting more of him. Decisions, decisions. Bella seems to be killing herself to prove something not only to herself, but also her father who seems to have cut her down every chance he got. Edward angers e for taking advantage of her circumstances. Still want to know whetethisall goes.Acesunshinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06419045905243993224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-87401929557654224562011-10-08T06:05:09.444-07:002011-10-08T06:05:09.444-07:00I Don't need a week. ¡YES, I ACCEPT!I Don't need a week. ¡YES, I ACCEPT!Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02603623506319053490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-8053825003765208412011-09-29T21:19:37.538-07:002011-09-29T21:19:37.538-07:00I feel so bad for Bella, she has such a hard life....I feel so bad for Bella, she has such a hard life. Poor girl. And you know Edward is just going to use her - especially judging by that prologue :/kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09615996992805133897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-44994818540304261112011-08-11T02:51:35.942-07:002011-08-11T02:51:35.942-07:00Holy...he may be an ass, but I am willing to accep...Holy...he may be an ass, but I am willing to accept that proposal for Bella! Woot woot! This is amazing!alyssia.lemonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03520595231760486494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-81670661885855193252011-07-06T21:48:44.776-07:002011-07-06T21:48:44.776-07:00I love how you describe the feeling of inferiority...I love how you describe the feeling of inferiority that washes over her while he is talking to her...I can so relate..I want the money...I want the hot man and I can't say no to him...what he fuck is going on??? setting up this fascinating relationships so beautifully...I am amazed and hot...xoxooxoxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-43646646424610048972011-06-19T15:36:53.516-07:002011-06-19T15:36:53.516-07:00Oh my! Decisions decisions. Sure would mean gettin...Oh my! Decisions decisions. Sure would mean getting some sleep - but then again... Brilliant idea for a story, cant wait to read more. lolBlondemel47https://www.blogger.com/profile/05682913331024015678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-3376187388453802502011-06-14T18:49:32.167-07:002011-06-14T18:49:32.167-07:00What a total dick, but a smooth dick, at that! Wha...What a total dick, but a smooth dick, at that! What a crazy situation, but not unrealistic I wonder how long he's been watching her? Hmmmm. I hope there will be an EPOV. I haven't been this into an AssWard since MOTU........great stuff.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17723208363349534941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-60725595054445498482011-06-07T06:43:39.444-07:002011-06-07T06:43:39.444-07:00“So...who's ready to meet Bella?” O-O Oh! T...“So...who's ready to meet Bella?” O-O Oh! That wasn’t Bella? 0-o Ah future Bella.<br />Hmmmm Bella and Angela (and Victoria and Jessica? Lauren too- well canned though) are maids? I had that job for 4 summers and it was no 5 stars. They have something to grumble about. Liking the dirty bitchy Angela ;-) And here he is. An indecent proposal but one she is drawn to despite herself? ~Elli~Iris~https://www.blogger.com/profile/16385689372212216037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-58282694210023264212011-05-20T18:23:46.405-07:002011-05-20T18:23:46.405-07:00Rapture's coming; thanks to a re-reading of th...Rapture's coming; thanks to a re-reading of this story.;)That Girl Tashahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17990208304236121737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-44296939203474726912011-05-17T04:04:09.765-07:002011-05-17T04:04:09.765-07:00*fans herself**fans herself*Sharon Larmourhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02272654923452277587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-56521557693610792062011-05-15T01:11:06.448-07:002011-05-15T01:11:06.448-07:00Wow. Speechless. Edward Cullen I'll accept. ;)...Wow. Speechless. Edward Cullen I'll accept. ;)rk_ashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08281978929506182113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-3874577228894552132011-05-03T19:48:02.461-07:002011-05-03T19:48:02.461-07:00wow. this story is leaving me speechless....wow. this story is leaving me speechless....Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11891197914292421971noreply@blogger.com