tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post6992080857044831440..comments2023-06-12T06:57:10.631-07:00Comments on Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu: Chapter ElevenUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger72125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-61533587306815106612011-12-26T23:05:06.643-08:002011-12-26T23:05:06.643-08:00O MY GOD!!!
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this chapter is pu...O MY GOD!!!<br />i'm speachless<br /><br />this chapter is pure perfeccionnelariverahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13210793087477032862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-64089149507297545442011-11-20T14:59:58.507-08:002011-11-20T14:59:58.507-08:00So good. He sees her she knows he does. What does ...So good. He sees her she knows he does. What does Esme know?fancastridehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18128829324064668928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-89564035468692165132011-11-06T09:20:16.134-08:002011-11-06T09:20:16.134-08:00Wow! Awesome chapter to a awesomely awful addicti...Wow! Awesome chapter to a awesomely awful addictive story. <br />They are both so broken. I can't wait to find out what is up with all of them.<br />Why hasn't Bella googled yet?Midnight Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06524856763153668177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-42266480844405627982011-09-22T18:43:47.280-07:002011-09-22T18:43:47.280-07:00sooo good! really enjoying this story, even if it&...sooo good! really enjoying this story, even if it's pissed me off and almost made me cry. It's that good though. :)Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03090377540912389420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-1932295385244374512011-07-18T11:50:29.251-07:002011-07-18T11:50:29.251-07:00What a phenomenal story; totally captivating. Your...What a phenomenal story; totally captivating. Your writing is beyond amazing. Your style, your words, mesmerize me and make even the most mundane parts come alive. Edward is f'd up, Bella is too, but she has such discipline for seeing past it all and keeping her eyes on her goal. Sometimes she stumbles, but she's so grounded that she doesn't fall far. Edward, on the other hand, has luv4kristenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10665399099440254165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-51076186142832190882011-06-11T10:35:13.851-07:002011-06-11T10:35:13.851-07:00This is so damn confusing!!! Who is Linc??? What h...This is so damn confusing!!! Who is Linc??? What happened to his baby girl?? Lord Im lost!luvnrobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17204168415297693831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-66888416050501503142011-06-08T17:36:07.330-07:002011-06-08T17:36:07.330-07:00Ch 11
“Esme!” he screams…not mom. Linc is Edward....Ch 11<br />“Esme!” he screams…not mom. Linc is Edward. Alice hates him. A paper…did Esme know what? “Jo…I still lost her…my baby girl…” Destroying the painting. Almost away and then he sees her. *shaking* She is running. I bet he calls now…after he gets out of jail. The paper. It has to do with his daughter but what? Mind racing…custody paper? A letter? Something that will say where ~Elli~Iris~https://www.blogger.com/profile/16385689372212216037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-84780893480897582802011-05-26T00:02:31.976-07:002011-05-26T00:02:31.976-07:00reading this chapter gave me chills. so powerful! ...reading this chapter gave me chills. so powerful! wowisleesme1https://www.blogger.com/profile/01544180281973452027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-91472959297240000402011-05-17T06:50:23.944-07:002011-05-17T06:50:23.944-07:00So many questions and no answers. My head is spinn...So many questions and no answers. My head is spinning and my heart hurtsSharon Larmourhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02272654923452277587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-24640028603023640042011-05-15T16:58:40.062-07:002011-05-15T16:58:40.062-07:00Oh wow! Such an incredible chapter. I need to read...Oh wow! Such an incredible chapter. I need to read it again and again. There was so much going on in that last scene. I really wish this was a movie cause I would watch this part like a zillion times. Not to mention all the pervy scenes too....Sessahhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15549287257136918918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-790886592537833462011-05-04T20:16:09.341-07:002011-05-04T20:16:09.341-07:00holy crap woman! i just discovered this story and ...holy crap woman! i just discovered this story and it has completely owned me- can't wait for more. seriously.Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11891197914292421971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-86020351267758527382011-05-03T14:08:34.167-07:002011-05-03T14:08:34.167-07:00o.k first off eff FF.R we allowed to cuss here? :D...o.k first off eff FF.R we allowed to cuss here? :D I FLOVE roughie. <br /><br />People who judge this story should think first.Bella went into this knowingly. she could have stopped going after the 1st time but in her own words she took too!!!!<br /><br />I wanna be a fifty and roughie sandwich:D wait, fifty who? pfffft. Fifty and roughie in a fuck off lol as in a dance off but in this case a k.malik78https://www.blogger.com/profile/00425345833686901790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-87578307042148549632011-05-03T09:49:13.617-07:002011-05-03T09:49:13.617-07:00please... give us MORE ROUGHIE! I can't wait t...please... give us MORE ROUGHIE! I can't wait to see what happens next... could this be a turning point?Brandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05131506704697739857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-36672503600062538482011-05-03T08:58:45.004-07:002011-05-03T08:58:45.004-07:00Are you planning to continue?Are you planning to continue?ldloahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03161823966955127373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-80748494740885219682011-05-02T11:34:31.628-07:002011-05-02T11:34:31.628-07:00I found your blog from reading another story hoste...I found your blog from reading another story hosted here (originally on Fan Fiction) and one of the readers mentioned your story's new home. I'm glad I found you again. I was left so intrigued by your last update... chapter 11 and I am looking forward to reading what comes next for our "couple". <br /><br />I re-read this chapter and there are just so many questions about Edwardshakespeare101https://www.blogger.com/profile/16010992729999187133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-20033850254368055592011-05-02T08:42:03.908-07:002011-05-02T08:42:03.908-07:00Oh yeah. Me again. No more crazy theories and marr...Oh yeah. Me again. No more crazy theories and marrying sisters. I think maybe Edwards needs to run into her at the hotel while some creep is giving her a hard time. Or better yet maybe she should find him in a moment if weakness or grief and help him. That would break the ice. <br /><br />RoshamboLuluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11584928746069417147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-53694448990098791302011-05-02T08:36:57.863-07:002011-05-02T08:36:57.863-07:00Stalking your blog...again. Wishful thinking that ...Stalking your blog...again. Wishful thinking that there might be an update. <br /><br />I just reread this chapter and my sick theory is that since Edward was adopted, he ended up unknowingly marrying his sister/half sister or cousin. Their baby ended up with a congenital disease as a result of breeding closely related parents and she died. That is what was on the paper that he was asking Esmee Luluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11584928746069417147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-83911776199407210232011-05-01T15:56:44.353-07:002011-05-01T15:56:44.353-07:00So glad you have this blog, I was saddened to see ...So glad you have this blog, I was saddened to see you weren't on FF and afraid I lost the story and Roughward.....<br /><br />I hope you update soon dear. Thanks sweetie I miss you....Can't wait to see what happens... Will Edward chase after Bella even though he said he wouldn't ever do that?.... Oh I'm on pins and needles....<br /><br />~JenniferTwilights1Fanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16826203283113479649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-78533701718991528322011-04-30T08:54:47.016-07:002011-04-30T08:54:47.016-07:00I wonder how many other great stories are being de...I wonder how many other great stories are being deleted from FF and I'm missing them...sorry this is happening but happy to have found your blog!lulu patzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05376070814211535063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-59854211571803008062011-04-30T08:52:06.352-07:002011-04-30T08:52:06.352-07:00am dying for an update!!! sooo good!!!!am dying for an update!!! sooo good!!!!lulu patzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05376070814211535063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-55239068873742515552011-04-29T16:47:51.766-07:002011-04-29T16:47:51.766-07:00HI
Are you planning on continuing the story or did...HI<br />Are you planning on continuing the story or did the FF drama turn you off to writing it?<br />I hope not. Just when it was getting good!<br />Please, continue.<br />:0)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-50348491018440931442011-04-28T22:08:54.348-07:002011-04-28T22:08:54.348-07:00it killes me how ff.net just deletes stories.
thi...it killes me how ff.net just deletes stories. <br />this happened to shaysavage last week, as well.<br /><br /><br />i am glad you have this blog. <br />now we know where to find our roughward.<br /><br />;)nonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15244246015252271332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-654422749474382792011-04-28T15:34:16.088-07:002011-04-28T15:34:16.088-07:00Who needs FF.net anyway?
The suspense is killing ...Who needs FF.net anyway? <br />The suspense is killing me here Jada!!!!!!!kathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10392736656747699537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-63197805838429075832011-04-27T21:49:16.254-07:002011-04-27T21:49:16.254-07:00What a powerful chapter... this was just amazing!!...What a powerful chapter... this was just amazing!!!!<br /><br />Janejjwelbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15186478306069132850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514713358566434619.post-29968137792369284002011-04-27T19:07:49.365-07:002011-04-27T19:07:49.365-07:00Well, hell... I don't know how ling I'll b...Well, hell... I don't know how ling I'll be able to hold off until the next chapter! And through his anguish, be saw her.... Mouthed her name... Maybe he will seek her out after all? And what he hell happened to the baby & who was the mother... And Esme really isn't his mother? Jadalulu, ju got alotta 'splainin to do!Musings of a Frenetic Multitaskerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08577487531845030916noreply@blogger.com